The diagram below shows how salt is removed from seawater to make it drinkable. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how salt is removed from seawater to make it drinkable. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the process of removing salt from the seawater in order to make it drinkable, detailing each stage from drawing the
water
to supplying it to users.
Firstly
,
saltwater
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salt water
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is taken by a pretreatment filter using pipelines that link the sea with containers.
Subsequently
,
water
is filtered – part of it is put forward to another container
while
the filter backwash is again sent to the sea.
Then
, selected
water
is forced through a membrane at high pressure. Since
water
molecules are smaller than salt ones, they are capable of going through the membrane. Salt,
in contrast
, in the form of the seawater concentrate is forced to return to the sea. Before drinkable
water
can be stored it has to undergo a process of chemical supplementation, which is called post-treatment.
Such
a process is responsible for cleaning the
water
using lime, chlorine, and fluoride. Clean
water
is
then
stored waiting to be sent to users. It happens through the integrated
water
supply system, which links
water
storage and recipients.
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