The first chart below shows the number of airline crew (pilots, stewards etc) needed to fly a passenger plane between Australia and a number of other countries. The second chart shows the number of passenger complaints per plane journey made on these routes, and average kilogram (kg) weight of luggage (or baggage) carried per passenger.
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The first bar chart illustrates the figure of airline members (pilots, stewards, etc) needed to fly a passenger plane between Australia and many other nations. The second diagram explains the figure of people's
complaints
per plane flight and the average kilogram weight of baggage taken per person.
According to
the first photo, Germany
has the highest number of crew which is 15 members, whereas
, New Zealand has the lowest crew members by 6 individuals. In addition
, Malaysia is not as high as Indonesia, with 8 compared to 13 respectively.
By looking at the second image, Germany
has an astronomical number of weights around 37.5 kilos and the lowest complaints
per journey of just 1, however
, New Zealand has exactly the contrary to Germany
with 15 kg per passenger and 6 complaints
per flight. Furthermore
, Malaysia is not quite as superior as Indonesia in weight ( 30, nearly 32 kg in order), but, both countries have the same figures on complaints
by about 3.
To sum up
, nations in Asia have approximately the same numbers. It is clear that
Germany
's aeroplane has huge planes. in contrast
, New Zealand has tiny planes.Submitted by Endo on
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