the line chart below shows the number of international conferences in three cities
The line provided chart illustrates the number of international
conferences
held in three cities over a period of 45 years from 1965 to 2010.
From an overall
perspective, It is readily apparent that there was a dramatic increase in the number of international conferences
in downtown C, whereas
, it can be seen the reversed pattern in cities A and B shown.
To begin
with, the figure
for the international Fix the agreement mistake
figures
conferences
in city
A and B are respectively about 35% and 30% in 1965,following 10 years, the quantities of both 2 cities leveled off Fix the agreement mistake
cities
approximately
30% to 29 %. the Change preposition
by approximately
last
period they decreased slightly including 20,25 %
On the other hand
,it is clear that
the amount
of worldwide Change the quantifier
number
conferences
held in city C gradually rose from 0% to 30% from 1965 to 1995.Followed by 25% in 2005 and the last
period it can be seen rebound about 30%Submitted by nacute2606 on
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