You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025.
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The given chart illustrates the
number
of
people
from three different countries who moved to crowded cities from villages since the year 2000,
in addition
to a forecast of
this
number
for 2025. As it is observed, the
amount
of these
people
went up in all these countries in
this
20-year period, especially in
Iran
and
Russia
, which jumped to
rocket
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.
First,
in 2000;
Iran
, Indonesia and
Russia
had nearly the same
amount
of 10
million
individuals moving out of Rural areas,
However
,
this
number
rapidly grew in
Russia
and
Iran
by 2010, despite the fact that
this
number
was constant in
Iran
for around five years between 2000 and 2005.
Furthermore
,
while
Russia
was experiencing a drastic climb in the
number
of villagers who chose to Live in urban parts of the country between 2010 and 2015, the population of these
peoplepeople
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people
in
Iran
had more of a slight increase and reached 50
million
. By 2020, the
number
rose to a certain
amount
of 80
million
in both countries and is expected to reach its peak by 2025 and pass 85 and 95
million
in
Iran
and
Russia
respectively. As for Indonesia, not a lot of
people
chose cities over not very crowded areas,
Thus
, the
number
of
people
who moved to urban parts of the country from rustic parts went up very modestly between the year 2000 and 2020 and reached only 30
million
.
This
amount
is predicted to remain stable by 2025 and not to go above 30
million
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, amount, iran, russia, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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