The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
expenditures
of different fields for households in the selected nations in 1968 and 2018. Overall
, people spent the most on food and least on fuel
and power in 1968 whereas
leisure accounted for a much larger percentage than fuel
and personal goods
wtih
the least Correct your spelling
with
share
in 2018. Housing, transport and leisure had a larger share
in 1968 than 2018
.
Starting with the Change preposition
in 2018
expenditures
which increased for the five decades, the increase in the share
of leisure is the most significant as it rose from less than 10% to approximately 23%, making it the most major spending area. Also
, the expenditures
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expenditure
of
housing almost doubled from 10% to just below 20%. Change preposition
on
Similarly
, transport experienced a slight increase from around 8% to below 15%.
Turning to the graph with less spendings
, the Fix the agreement mistake
spending
expenditures
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expenditure
of
food, which Change preposition
on
shared
the largest in 1968, dropped severely from 35% to about 17% in 2018. The percentage of clothing and Verb problem
was
fooware
and personal Correct your spelling
footwear
goods
decreased from about 6% to about 4% and from about 8% to less than 5% , respectively. There is also
a reduction in the share
of fuel
with below 5% from about 6%. These declining trends make fuel
,power and personal goods
the least common areas for people to spend in 2018. In contrast
, household goods
are the only category whose share
remained unchanged at below 10% for the examined period of time.Submitted by mizuho on
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