4.The diagram below shows the changes that have taken place at west park secondary school since its construction in 1950. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The process diagram provides information on how changes that West Park Secondary School was made by construction places in
three
different years 1950, 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
the main road and the main building school have not changed any year, as well as
the science block since its new design in 1980. However
, the playground was reduced by three
quarters compared to its original size
slightly small in 2010.
In 1950, the old decade's farmland and houses were the same size
but there are three
houses this
year, but in 1980 the newly built car park and science block were replaced by houses. It is a new playing zone created by a sports field after
this
field damaged farmland. So, these two years did not change the other two zones.
In 2010, the Sports field and playground size
decreased and the other two names (science block and school) did not change, but the Car park size
was increased by overall
three
years.Submitted by nikhilnath1996 on
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