The pie charts give information about the three various elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of three meal plans, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport.

The pie charts give information about the three various elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of three meal plans, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport.
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The presented pie charts compare data about the proportion of 3 different parts that are in the 3 types of food plans that a range of people use.
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, it is important that the factor that helps people to have a good
diet
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is Carbohydrates
while
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Fat is the harmful element.
According to
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the graphs, Carbohydrate, the main factor that helps the population to have a good meal,
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the largest section in a healthy
diet
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for sport by 60%;
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both healthy and average form scored 50 and 40 per cent.
In contrast
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to the
last
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section, for protein Average
diet
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, which had the same percentage as carbohydrates, is the first one;
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, the healthy
diet
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hit 30%;
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, the other one is exactly a quarter. The diagrams demonstrate that dishes that have fat are not good owing to the fact that the sportsmen have to use 15% of it;
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, the others which have the same fraction as touch one-fifths.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words diet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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