The pie charts give information about the three various elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of three meal plans, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport.

The pie charts give information about the three various elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of three meal plans, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport.
The presented pie charts compare data about the proportion of 3 different parts that are in the 3 types of food plans that a range of people use.
Overall
, it is important that the factor that helps people to have a good
diet
is Carbohydrates
while
Fat is the harmful element.
According to
the graphs, Carbohydrate, the main factor that helps the population to have a good meal,
reach
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the largest section in a healthy
diet
for sport by 60%;
then
both healthy and average form scored 50 and 40 per cent.
In contrast
to the
last
section, for protein Average
diet
, which had the same percentage as carbohydrates, is the first one;
thereafter
, the healthy
diet
hit 30%;
moreover
, the other one is exactly a quarter. The diagrams demonstrate that dishes that have fat are not good owing to the fact that the sportsmen have to use 15% of it;
furthermore
, the others which have the same fraction as touch one-fifths.
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