The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity if various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 an 1995. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts present the change in the European adults' pastimes in 1985 and 1995.
Overview, the most popular leisure activity in 1985 was eating out. After 10 years, playing computer games became the most favourable to many people in Europe.
According to
research, people who watched TV accounted for 32%, the highest number of all leisure events. Then
, it decreased by 2% in 1995. On the other hand
, most adults loved to play online games in 1995 with a number 27%.
Concerning other entertainment, "Going out to eat" dramatically decreased from 15% to 8%. Likewise
, there was an obvious drop in "A talk with families" from 18% to 7%.
Moreover
, "Others" was reported to fall with the number of 6% in 1985 and 2% in 1995, the lowest figure.
Conversely
, the statistic of "Chit-chat with friends" has climbed over the past ten years. It was 21% in 1985 and next became 26%. Other than the computer playing recreation, "Talking with friends" also
rose, and the only item which had growth compared to other past activities in 1985.Submitted by hayashidajinja820 on
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