The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant
The maps illustrate the transformation of a beach bank in 1950 compared
until
now. Change preposition
to
Overall
, the beachfront witness
considerable changes with the most noticeable being the relocation and expansion of the main Wrong verb form
witnessed
road
, car park and entertainment area.
In 1950, the main road
was very short and located to the north of the beach. A car park was in
the bottom Change preposition
at
in
the main Change preposition
of
road
and next to the pavilion. In the past, this
coast was less entertainment and public area.
Nowadays, the beachfront has experienced a lot of changes. Firstly
, the main road
was radically extended to the east of the coast and next to the lighthouse. Secondly
, a new carpark
was built to replace the playground. Correct your spelling
car park
Thirdly
, the beach river expands a lot of entertainment areas such
as restaurant
and double surf Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
club
. Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
Besides
, the swimming pool in the south west
has been expanded to add 25 Correct your spelling
southwest
meter
.Change to a plural noun
meters
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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