The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant

The maps illustrate the transformation of a beach bank in 1950 compared
until
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now.
Overall
, the beachfront
witness
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considerable changes with the most noticeable being the relocation and expansion of the main
road
, car park and entertainment area. In 1950, the main
road
was very short and located to the north of the beach. A car park was
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the bottom
in
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the main
road
and next to the pavilion. In the past,
this
coast was less entertainment and public area. Nowadays, the beachfront has experienced a lot of changes.
Firstly
, the main
road
was radically extended to the east of the coast and next to the lighthouse.
Secondly
, a new
carpark
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car park
was built to replace the playground.
Thirdly
, the beach river expands a lot of entertainment areas
such
as
restaurant
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and double surf
club
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clubs
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.
Besides
, the swimming pool in the
south west
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has been expanded to add 25
meter
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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