The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart compares the changes
of
percentage with 3 electrical appliances and the spending of time doing house chores in households in a particular country from 1920 to 2019.
Change preposition
in
It is clear that
the ownership of all 3 household electrical tools increased during the hundred years. Simultaneously, the number of hours doing housework per week decreased.
In 1920, washing machine
had the highest percentage (40%) owned by households among the three electricity-generated appliances. The following was vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
machines
cleaner
, with 30%, and Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
refrigerator
at that time Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
was
barely owned by a household, which was almost 0%. After 20 years later, the ownership of Unnecessary verb
apply
refrigerator
grew significantly, which became the second highest figure. In 2019, every house Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
were
equipped with Change the verb form
was
refrigerator
and vacuum cleaner, Add an article
a refrigerator
while
washing machine
only accounted for less than 80%.
Fix the agreement mistake
machines
On the other hand
, amount
of time spent doing housework per week, Correct article usage
the amount
such
as washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning had dropped dramatically, from 50% in 1920 to about 10% in 2019.Submitted by lovesonya0227 on
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