The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart compares the changes
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percentage with 3 electrical appliances and the spending of time doing house chores in households in a particular country from 1920 to 2019.
It is clear that
the ownership of all 3 household electrical tools increased during the hundred years. Simultaneously, the number of hours doing housework per week decreased. In 1920, washing
machine
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machines
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had the highest percentage (40%) owned by households among the three electricity-generated appliances. The following was vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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, with 30%, and
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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at that time
was
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barely owned by a household, which was almost 0%. After 20 years later, the ownership of
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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grew significantly, which became the second highest figure. In 2019, every house
were
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equipped with
refrigerator
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a refrigerator
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and vacuum cleaner,
while
washing
machine
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machines
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only accounted for less than 80%.
On the other hand
,
amount
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the amount
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of time spent doing housework per week,
such
as washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning had dropped dramatically, from 50% in 1920 to about 10% in 2019.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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