Fresh water has always been a limited resources in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem.
It is a fact that
water
sources have always been a problem
for some countries of the world. Nowadays, due to
the increasing population
, the problem
has become global. It happens for a variety of reasons,however
,solutions exist to solve it.
I consider two factors to blame for why this
happens. Firstly
, the crucial issue is restaurants
, because they throw their trash into the seas or oceans and it has led to pollution of freshwater sources and reduced the amount of water
. For example
, recent research shows that the amount of clean water
has reduced until
12 per cent in Bakı. Change preposition
to
Secondly
, the growing population
is another contributing factor, because the increasing of people means expanding water
consumption for drinking, sanitation, and agriculture. For instance
, the population
of Turkey is growing and it leads to thirst in some parts of the country because everyone should have been given enough water
.
Nevertheless
, by taking some straightforward measures we can combat this
problem
. The solution should start with the restaurants
which cause pollution. The government ought to make legislation to ensure that the staff of the restaurants
do not pollute our environment. For example
, if anyone pollutes the sea, he will have to pay a fine and it will reduce these people's actions. Furthermore
, the government may make some areas for rubbish in order to keep the environment clean. Another effective measure to be taken would be teaching the public how they can save water
and how essential is it. For instance
, some TV programs should be designed in order to provide people with effective information about savings.
In conclusion, the problem
of reduced water
derives from the restaurants
and the growing population
, and this
problem
will not be solved unless necessary measures are taken.Submitted by nezerli.x12 on
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