Fresh water has always been a limited resources in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem.
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, if anyone pollutes the sea, he will have to pay a fine and it will reduce these people's actions. Linking Words
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, the government may make some areas for rubbish in order to keep the environment clean. Another effective measure to be taken would be teaching the public how they can save Linking Words
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For instance
, some TV programs should be designed in order to provide people with effective information about savings.
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