The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The picture illustrates the result of different reasons teenagers in certain African
country
use their phones for Fix the agreement mistake
countries
in
four years period: 2016, 2017, 2018 and 2019.
From the data, it can be seen that the main reason teenagers in Change preposition
apply
this
country using
their phones Wrong verb form
use
were
mainly for social networks. There was 50% of them who used it to socialize in 2016. Wrong verb form
is
Although
it was
slightly decreased in 2017, the number jumped back in 2018 and hit Unnecessary verb
apply
it
highest point at 56% in 2019. The usage of digital Correct pronoun usage
its
camera
was Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
also
the other reason for them to used
it. Wrong verb form
use
Although
there was a slight stagnant point between 2016 and 2017, the number continue
to Wrong verb form
continued
increased
by 3% and 2% in 2018 and 2019 respectively.
Change the verb
increase
In contrast
, there were less
adolescents who used their Change the quantifier
fewer
phone
to Fix the agreement mistake
phones
email
or made
calls. Wrong verb form
make
Initially
, there was 25% of them who used it for email
in 2016. However
, the number of adolescents that used it to email
was
gradually decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
by
each passing Change preposition
with
years
until only 19% of them Fix the agreement mistake
year
that
used the Correct pronoun usage
apply
phone
for the
Correct article usage
apply
email
. Also
despite there was
a 3% increase in teenagers that used their Replace the word
being
phone
to Fix the agreement mistake
phones
made
Wrong verb form
make
phone
calls in 2016, by
each passing Change preposition
with
years
, it gradually decreased until hit it Fix the agreement mistake
year
lowest
point Correct pronoun usage
its lowest
at
5% in 2019.
In conclusion, the main reasons Change preposition
of
for
adolescents in Change preposition
apply
a
certain African Correct article usage
apply
country
Fix the agreement mistake
countries
used
their Wrong verb form
use
phone
Fix the agreement mistake
phones
was for
social networks and the usage of digital Verb problem
are
camera
.Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phone, email with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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