The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing different ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing different ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows a snapshot of percentages of different approaches to deal with global warming by youth in four different countries in 2008.
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we can observe the dominance of Portugal in every sector with
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just lagging behind. Romania remained stable throughout,
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, Holand experienced a resurgence. It is portrayed that in the lifestyle
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is almost at 45%,
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at 25%, Romania at 15% and Holand is just above 10%. Portugal showed a little decrease in the next sector but remained steady for the next one until it dropped down to 30% in none of these.
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had some fluctuations and reached its lowest point in advanced technology of around 10%. Romania remains uniform at 20% through government regulations and advanced technology eventually receding to 15% in none of them .
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, Holand was significantly low
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initial sectors but
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had a sudden boost at 30% and remained steady until the end.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words poland with synonyms.
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