The diagram below illustrates the process where bricks are made for the building industry. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture diagram illustrates the flow
process
of bricks
made for the construction industry. Overall
, there are seven steps in the process
, starting with raw material preparation through clay
digging and ending with the packaging process
to prepare bricks
for delivery to the consumer.
In the first step, we use an excavator to dig the clay
from the ground; after that, there will be a metal grid and roller for crushing and screening the clay
until it reaches a consistent texture. Next,
the textured clay
will be mixed with sand and water to form a desirable mixture. The third process
is forming bricks
, which can be done in two methods: where clay
is pressed into mold
or extrusion, where the Change the spelling
mould
clay
is cut into individual bricks
by a wire cutter.
The shaped bricks
are left to dry in an oven for 24-48 hours before entering the kiln for the firing stage. There are two steps of burning bricks
in the kiln, first at a moderate temperature of about 220-989 degrees Celsius, and second at a high temperature of 870-1300 degrees Celsius, in order to harden bricks
. After that, the hardened bricks
need to be left in the cooling chamber for 48-72 hours. Finally
, the finished bricks
are ready to be packaged and distributed to the consumer.Submitted by cipi.magdalena on
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