The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The given map provides us with information about how the village of Ryemouth looked back in 1995 and now.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that there have been plenty of innovations. We can see that some of the facilities were replaced by others and a number of new houses
were.
To begin
with, in 1995 in the north-west, there were less
Change the quantifier
fewer
houses
, however
, today the number of houses
has increased, in
addition
the roads Add a comma
addition,
also
were developed what
made reaching new Correct pronoun usage
which
houses
more comfortable. In front of the houses
to the north-east of the city
there were Add a comma
city,
a
farmland and a forest park below it. These areas were knocked down and replaced with new facilities: golf and tennis areas. In the south-east just beyond the hotel Remove the article
apply
also
new car parking is constructed.
Moving towards the south of the map, we can see that there were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
fishing
port back in 1995, but it is not available now. There Correct article usage
a fishing
also
were fish markets which are now replaced by new apartments. Moreover
, the shops from
the opposite side of the road Change preposition
on
was
Change the verb form
were
also
replaced by restaurants. The cafe from the south-east hasn't changed its place.Submitted by ayshanngurbanova on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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