The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
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The given line graph illustrates asked for data at a tourist office in the United Kingdom over a 6-month period ending in June.
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, it is clearly seen that requests for the two types increased except for by
letter
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, which was decreased. In
person
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, it became the most popular over the period, overtaking by
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and by telephone,
while
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by
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decreased in June. At the beginning of the term, appeals by telephone were the highest around 900.
In
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person
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,
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, was the lowest approximately 450. In three months,
in
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person
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applications experienced dramatic growth and reached just over 1200. By phone, rising slightly to plateau at 1000. From April,
in
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in-person
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person
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appeals rocketed
and
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apply
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topping roughly 1900 and it was the highest
over
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the
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rate and by telephone
also
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rise
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and reached 1600.
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,
by
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by-letter
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letter
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calls remain more and less the same from January to March. From
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three
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months,
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it diminishes nearly from 500 to 380.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words letter, person with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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