You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In certain states, the majority of the young generation selects to obtain on-the-jobjob training

instead

of attending high school.

This

essay discussed that the pros outweigh the cons.

First,

this

essay argues that securing future employment is an advantage and demotivation to

subject

matters leads to

the

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theoretical

knowledge

as a disadvantage.

To begin

, the students who are obtaining on-the-jobjob training will be able to secure a career from an employer. Throughout the world, a person who has prior work experience is considered a valuable asset in the job market and given priority even in an interview over educationally qualified people.

As a result

of

this

impact, people who

has

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career exposure can secure a job opportunity.

For instance

, Recent research concluded that the Canadian job market employment vacancies are filled by experienced staff

than

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rather than

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educated employees. Despite the advantage, a

Lack

of motivation towards education matters will cause reduced

knowledge

about the

subject

matter. When people tend to work, the focus

for

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the

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studies will be reduced because of limited time and

lack

of fitness. Ultimately, students just

attends

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the lecture solely for attendance purposes and not focus on the

subject

matter.

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they will not be well equipped with the

subject

matter. A recent newspaper article mentioned that the majority of the young generation who have been in on-the-job training

lack

theoretical

knowledge

.

to conclude

, the young generation selecting in working taring is crucial to secure their future outweigh the

lack

of

subject

knowledge

due to

work experience.