The bar chart shows the number of male and female students doing scientific research across a range of disciplines at a UK university in 2009.
The provided chart compares the
number
of UK students
, divided by gender, who conduct
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conducted
in
6 different scientific topics in 2009. Change preposition
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Overall
, biology was the most popular discipline out of the other categories and veterinary medicine
was chosen the least.
The number
of male students
were
higher in all topics, except for the animal-related field. Biology and physics shared a similar Change the verb form
was
number
of male students
with around 240 and 230 respectively. Similarly
, astronomy and geology had the same exact number
with 150 male students
. Medicine
also
had a quite big number
accounting 200
male Change preposition
for 200
students
. Lastly
, veterinary medicine
had the smallest proportion with only a three quarter
of male Add a hyphen
three-quarter
students
.
The number
of female students
choosing biology was the highest compared to the other categories, with 200 students
. Followed by medicine
with approximately 175 female students
. In contrast
with male students
, veterinary medicine
was popular among female students
which
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apply
reached
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reaching
to
around 110. There were fewer than 100 female Change preposition
apply
students
who chose astronomy and geology, with 75 and 60 students
respectively. The discipline that was chosen the least in the women
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women's
categoty
was physics with just 40 female Correct your spelling
category
students
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