You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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the graph below shows
that
the Correct word choice
apply
percetages
of Correct your spelling
percentage
percentages
fours
Fix the agreement mistake
four
west
Replace the word
Western
country
between 1970 to 2020, with Fix the agreement mistake
countries
guest
from 2030 to 2040
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guests
Firstly
,the most of population
are philippines
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Philippines
on
1970 , Change preposition
in
in addition
,the lower of population
is ındonessia ,Add an article
the population
on the other hand
, the
starting Change preposition
at the
1980's
,Change noun form
1980s
malaysia
of Change the capitalization
Malaysia
populations
Fix the agreement mistake
population
are increasing
than Wrong verb form
increased
other
three countries and Correct article usage
the other
come
Wrong verb form
came
fisrt
Correct your spelling
first
at
2040 .At the same time ,Change preposition
in
while
Change the capitalization
Malaysia
malaysia
and ındonesia of cıtızens approximately three-times were Change the capitalization
Malaysia
Correct your spelling
increased
incresed
,Correct your spelling
increased
thailand
and Change the capitalization
Thailand
Change the capitalization
Philippines
Correct article usage
the philippines
philippines
Change the capitalization
Philippines
has
doubled
Verb problem
apply
Although
the Philippines
passed Malaysia
in 1970 and 1990, the Philippines
had the highest population
in 2000, while
Indonesia passed Thailand in 2000 and then
surpassed the Philippines
in 2010 to become the second.
In short, the graph below shows the population
of four countries, while
the highest population
was in the Philippines
in 1970, the highest population
was in Malaysia
in 2040.Submitted by tugay9619 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, philippines, malaysia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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