You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows

that

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the

percetages

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percentage

percentages

of

fours

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four

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west

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Western

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country

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countries

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between 1970 to 2020, with

guest

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guests

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from 2030 to 2040

Firstly

,the most of

population

are

philippines

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Philippines

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on

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in

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1970 ,

in addition

,the lower of

population

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the population

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is ındonessia ,

on the other hand

,

the

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at the

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starting

1980's

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1980s

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,

malaysia

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Malaysia

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of

populations

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population

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are increasing

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increased

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than

other

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the other

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three countries and

come

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came

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fisrt

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first

at

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in

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2040 .At the same time ,

while

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Malaysia

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malaysia

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Malaysia

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and ındonesia of cıtızens approximately three-times were

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increased

incresed

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increased

,

thailand

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Thailand

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and

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Philippines

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the philippines

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philippines

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Philippines

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has

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doubled

Although

the

Philippines

passed

Malaysia

in 1970 and 1990, the

Philippines

had the highest

population

in 2000,

while

Indonesia passed Thailand in 2000 and

then

surpassed the

Philippines

in 2010 to become the second. In short, the graph below shows the

population

of four countries,

while

the highest

population

was in the

Philippines

in 1970, the highest

population

was in

Malaysia

in 2040.