Test 1: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Test 1: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during

 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph compares the average monthly change in the amount of three metals named
copper
,
nickel
and
zinc
in 2014. Units are given in percentages.
Overall
,
it is clear that
at the start,
nickel
was exorbitant but with time the
price
reduced heavily and other metals too fluctuated. In January,
nickel
was the most expensive metal, recording 6
percent
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initially
.
Also
,
zinc
and
copper
recorded 1 and 2, respectively.
However
, the
price
for
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of
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nickel
drastically declined and reached
to
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-3% in the month of June.
This
was the lowest percentage change recorded in all materials.
Similarly
, the cost of
copper
also
reduced minorly and reached approximately 0.5%.
In contrast
,
percentage
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the percentage
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change in
price
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of
zinc
grew rapidly to 3% in February and heavily decreased to -1% by June. Thereby, the
price
for
nickel
,
zinc
and
copper
metals inclined to -1%, 0.5% and 1%, respectively in July.
Similarly
, all three remained at their values for 2 months and followed the same trend with minor fluctuations and grew to 1%, 2% and 1.5%, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, similarly".
Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc, price with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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