Test 1: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the average monthly change in the amount of three metals named
copper
, Use synonyms
nickel
and Use synonyms
zinc
in 2014. Units are given in percentages.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
at the start, Linking Words
nickel
was exorbitant but with time the Use synonyms
price
reduced heavily and other metals too fluctuated.
In January, Use synonyms
nickel
was the most expensive metal, recording 6 Use synonyms
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
initially
. Linking Words
Also
, Linking Words
zinc
and Use synonyms
copper
recorded 1 and 2, respectively. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
price
Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
of
nickel
drastically declined and reached Use synonyms
to
-3% in the month of June. Change preposition
apply
This
was the lowest percentage change recorded in all materials. Linking Words
Similarly
, the cost of Linking Words
copper
Use synonyms
also
reduced minorly and reached approximately 0.5%. Linking Words
In contrast
, Linking Words
percentage
change in Add an article
the percentage
Use synonyms
price
of Add an article
the price
zinc
grew rapidly to 3% in February and heavily decreased to -1% by June.
Thereby, the Use synonyms
price
for Use synonyms
nickel
, Use synonyms
zinc
and Use synonyms
copper
metals inclined to -1%, 0.5% and 1%, respectively in July. Use synonyms
Similarly
, all three remained at their values for 2 months and followed the same trend with minor fluctuations and grew to 1%, 2% and 1.5%, respectively.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, similarly".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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