Test 1: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares the average monthly change in the amount of three metals named
copper
, nickel
and zinc
in 2014. Units are given in percentages.
Overall
, it is clear that
at the start, nickel
was exorbitant but with time the price
reduced heavily and other metals too fluctuated.
In January, nickel
was the most expensive metal, recording 6 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
initially
. Also
, zinc
and copper
recorded 1 and 2, respectively. However
, the price
for
Change preposition
of
nickel
drastically declined and reached to
-3% in the month of June. Change preposition
apply
This
was the lowest percentage change recorded in all materials. Similarly
, the cost of copper
also
reduced minorly and reached approximately 0.5%. In contrast
, percentage
change in Add an article
the percentage
price
of Add an article
the price
zinc
grew rapidly to 3% in February and heavily decreased to -1% by June.
Thereby, the price
for nickel
, zinc
and copper
metals inclined to -1%, 0.5% and 1%, respectively in July. Similarly
, all three remained at their values for 2 months and followed the same trend with minor fluctuations and grew to 1%, 2% and 1.5%, respectively.Submitted by Witharana Senesh Rasinda Wickramasinghe on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, similarly".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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