In many countries, childhood obesity is a growing problem. What are the reasons for this and what can individuals and governments do to tackle the problem?

Obesity in

childreen

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children

is in a lot of

countries

an increasing

problem

. In

this

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some of the reasons for

this

problem

will be discussed and some possible solutions delivered by individuals and governments will be

adressed

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addressed

.

Firstly

, will be fair to say that

this

is mainly a first world

problem

or a

problem

for new development

countries

, there are different reasons and they are all connected.

Thus

, one of the main

reason

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reasons

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is that the

childreen

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children

are not doing enough

excersice

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exercise

.

Generally

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they

expend

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spend

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long hours inside their houses playing online video games

instead

of

been

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being

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outside and

be

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playing

toguether

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together

to

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with

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physical games

such

as football or basketball

.

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together.

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Differents

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surveys

has

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shown

thoughout

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throughout

the

last

decade that the population of

children

from developed

countries

are

lossing

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losing

interest or they have totally lost it already, in playing sports. The reason why

this

is happening is because it is more practical and easier to be at home connecting with their friend using the computer than going out either because of weather

condition

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conditions

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or related to the fact that their parents

needs

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to take them.

Moreover

, another reason is the fact that the amount of 'junk food' that

the

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children

are eaten nowadays is shocking. There are different documentaries

such

as Fed Up that discuss

as well as

other things how much sugar is added to the daily meal plan by the food companies. The parents have less time to prepare

the

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dinner at home so they buy already meals, take ways or allow them to snack

crisps

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or chocolates

..

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These types of meals are dramatically loaded with sugars or the food quality is not very good.

Secondly

, to resolve these two main factors that are profundly related

with

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obesity, the

indivisuals

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individuals

individual

( in the

children

's case the parents as

main

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the main

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responsable

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responsible

figure)

is

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are

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to deliver a more healthy diet and

also

to push their

children

to play outside either by cutting the amount of time that the

children

have for using their computer or by taking them to the playground. The

goverments

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government

governments

should promote more

excercise

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exercise

at schools as a way to

increment

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the exercise time and

also

they could regulate the amount of sugar

that is

in the meals prepared by the industry. In conclusion, to resolve

this

problem

called obesity that

affect

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affects

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the

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future generations in different

countries

is to teach them a healthier

life style

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lifestyle

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.