Technology is becoming an increasingly important part of education. Some people say that this is a positive development, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Do you think the increasing use of technology in education is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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has become an integral part

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education. Some people argue that it is a constructive development,

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others believe that it has a detrimental effect. I believe with the view that

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is enabling

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to learn beyond what the previous generation can get.

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has

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people

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as the resources for study are unlimited.

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,

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cannot fully rely on utilising

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in education as the

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need direct control

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their internet activities. Generally,

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has helped

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to learn beyond their expertise and

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access unlimited resources. Nowadays, with the internet connection

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who come from different countries can easily

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and can acquire knowledge not only from books.

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of

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leads

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to innovation that certainly will have economic value and

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jobs.

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ecosystem, scholars who came from Japan can share the outcome of their research with other scholars from different countries faster

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will lead to creating products within

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period of time.

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, all mankind cannot fully rely on

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for educational purposes and only

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it as a mere

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tool. The price of

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unlimited resources might be a double-edged

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for the

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as it can lead to misinformation and they were unable to

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which one is fact or fiction.

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, through social media people can share any information without fact-checking and nobody can reveal whether the information is true or false.

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, I believe that

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allow

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students

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to learn beyond what a book offers and they can get

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knowledge faster and from borderless sources.

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, relying

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without prior digital knowledge can make them prone to misinformation.