Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Mass

tourism

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is widely present in the contemporary world.

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, despite many

people

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take

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advantage of what it offers, it is often believed that it has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. I partly agree with

this

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thesis and claim that it has both pros and cons.

Tourism

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has

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significant benefits for visiting states. First and foremost, it improves their economy. In poorer regions of the

world

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world,

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a huge part of the society lives from

tourism

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, which means that they

provides

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accomodation

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accommodation

, food, and entertainment for

tourists

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thus

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, travellers have a positive impact on the visiting country.

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, there are many different types of

tourists

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- to illustrate

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for

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instance

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backpackers are the

people

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who try to get involved and help the society they visit. Not only

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they sightseeing, but

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often teach

english

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in local schools, take part in

workcamps

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work camps

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, and,

what

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apply

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the

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apply

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most

important

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importantly

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, respect the community that

host

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them. On the other

hadn

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hand

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relevant drawbacks of mass

tourism

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are presented too. The most significant of them is

interupting

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interrupting

every

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the

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day

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everyday

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life of residents. In places

such

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as Venice, Italy or Paris, France, a massive influx of travellers can handicap the

life

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lives

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of local

people

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, who suffer from crowded streets and high prices.

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, most

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apply

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tourists

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the tourists

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do not really care about

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the naturall

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naturall

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natural

environment of visiting places.

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, travellers can often contribute to the pollution of beaches, forests, and water recipients. In conclusion, I partly agree with the statement that mass

tourism

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has a negative impact on the countries travelled to.

Tourists

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can contribute to

pollution

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the pollution

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of the environment and

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the handicap

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handicap live

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handicapped lives

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of local

people

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however

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, they

also

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can boost the economy of visiting states

as well as

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positivly

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positively

influence the hosting society in the form of workcamps, and

english

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lessons.

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type precision

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Cultural exchanges
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