The diagram shows the process of the water treatment.

The diagram shows the process of the water treatment.
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The graph shows the
process
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of how the
water
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is treated.
Overall
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,
this
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is a man-made linear cycle of how to treat the
water
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with ten phases, and
this
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start
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starts
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with intake of
water
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screens and there are several raw
materials
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added
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as chlorine, sodium hydroxide and fluoride.
Finally
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,
this
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process
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end
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ends
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with
water
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running
thought
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through
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faucet
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the faucet
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.
This
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process
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tarts
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starts
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with intake
water
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through screens to be allowed to get in the tubes.
After
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this
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, the
water
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runs and
pass-through
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passes through
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pumps to continue the treatment
water
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.
Following
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this
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, the
water
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gets into the flash mix
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where raw
materials
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are added
such
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as Poly
aluminum
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aluminium
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chloride and Oxidants to sterilize it.
Next,
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water
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goes into
flocculation
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the flocculation
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phase to remove undesired
materials
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like tiny stones to be ready for use.
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, the settling basin where layers of different
materials
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are done to continue the
process
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of
water
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treatment. The next stage is Chlorine
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that
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which
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is added to the
water
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to be clean, and
this
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follow
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follows
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the
process
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path with the filter membrane area, so it can separate tiny stones and filter pure
water
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.
Besides
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this
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, it reaches the pump areas to be conducted to the faucet where the
water
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reaches the final
water
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treatment
process
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally, such".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, water, materials with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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