The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented maps illustrate changes that happened in the areas which were around the hospital in two various times namely, 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it was important that the facilities that helped the populations to have good access to the treatment place increased over the period of 3 years.
Linking Words
According to
the pictures, in 2010, the Linking Words
City
Hospital, Ring Use synonyms
Road
, around the hospital, and both the hospital and Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
road
were the same as Use synonyms
the
prior; Correct article usage
apply
however
, the region interacted not only Linking Words
city
Use synonyms
road
with the hospital Use synonyms
road
but Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
the
hospital Change preposition
with the
road
with the ring Use synonyms
road
they have built the 2 different roundabouts in 2010.
The diagrams demonstrate that in the past Use synonyms
time
we could see the parking, on the east of the hospital street,for both public and staff and 6 several bus stops; Add a comma
time,
then
in 2010, the Linking Words
last
car park was replaced by staff parking; Linking Words
moreover
, the public forms moved to the east of the Linking Words
city
hospital and that entrance opened at ring Use synonyms
road
. Use synonyms
In addition
, they established the bus station, on the east side of the hospital Linking Words
road
; Use synonyms
furthermore
, Linking Words
this
district had two various entrances from both squares.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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