The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented maps illustrate changes that happened in the areas which were around the hospital in two various times namely, 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it was important that the facilities that helped the populations to have good access to the treatment place increased over the period of 3 years.
According to
the pictures, in 2010, the City
Hospital, Ring Road
, around the hospital, and both the hospital and city
road
were the same as the
prior; Correct article usage
apply
however
, the region interacted not only city
road
with the hospital road
but also
the
hospital Change preposition
with the
road
with the ring road
they have built the 2 different roundabouts in 2010.
The diagrams demonstrate that in the past time
we could see the parking, on the east of the hospital street,for both public and staff and 6 several bus stops; Add a comma
time,
then
in 2010, the last
car park was replaced by staff parking; moreover
, the public forms moved to the east of the city
hospital and that entrance opened at ring road
. In addition
, they established the bus station, on the east side of the hospital road
; furthermore
, this
district had two various entrances from both squares.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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