The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented maps illustrate changes that happened in the areas which were around the hospital in two various times namely, 2007 and 2010.
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, it was important that the facilities that helped the populations to have good access to the treatment place increased over the period of 3 years.
According to
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the pictures, in 2010, the
City
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Hospital, Ring
Road
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, around the hospital, and both the hospital and
city
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road
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were the same as
the
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prior;
however
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, the region interacted not only
city
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road
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with the hospital
road
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but
also
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the
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with the
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hospital
road
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with the ring
road
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they have built the 2 different roundabouts in 2010. The diagrams demonstrate that in the past
time
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we could see the parking, on the east of the hospital street,for both public and staff and 6 several bus stops;
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in 2010, the
last
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car park was replaced by staff parking;
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, the public forms moved to the east of the
city
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hospital and that entrance opened at ring
road
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.
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, they established the bus station, on the east side of the hospital
road
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;
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,
this
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district had two various entrances from both squares.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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