The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph provides data on the amount of ticket purchases made for films released in a diversity of genres, between 1996 to 2006 in an unnamed country.

overall

, there is a dramatic difference between the provided genres. Across the two different years, Drama and Comedy remain most popular. With regard to cinema ticket sales, the percentage in 1996 and 2006 had a significant increase at its release date for comedy and drama movies.

However

, fantasy and romance both remain insignificant.

However

, there was a slight decrease in the production of comedy in 2006,

although

the amount of cinema ticket sales grew rapidly.

Whereas

drama gets less popular over time.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

109 words

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significant increases/decreases
highlighting
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discrepancies
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phenomenon
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