The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The picture
illustrate
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illustrates
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the number of global
pineapple
exports from the top three
pineapple
-producing countries in 2009 and 2019,
along with
a detailed analysis of the consumer
cost
per
pineapple
in 2019. Based on the data, it could be seen that compared to the other countries,
country
B placed first as the
country
who
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that
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exported the most
pineapple
, with more than 4
millions
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million
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metric tonnes in 2009.
In contrast
,
country
C exported the least with only less than 2
millions
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million
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metric tonnes in the same year and
country
A placed in second with number slightly higher than
country
C.
However
, in 2019,
this
situation changed
where
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when
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country
A surpassed the other two countries by exporting almost 12
millions
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million
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metric tonnes of pineapples.
While
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Country
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country
B placed
in
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apply
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second because they had a sharp
decreased
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decrease
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in their export and
while
country
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Country
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C had a slight increase, they still
place
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placed
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third.
Also
, in 2019, distribution and retail had taken 35% of the consumer
cost
per
pineapple
. Taxes, profit, international transport and import licenses
were
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were also almost taken
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also
almost took much from the
cost
. Only producer and export costs were
ones
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the ones
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that
cost
a little with only 5% and 4% respectively. In overview, in 2009
country
B placed first as
pineapple
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a pineapple
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exporter.
However
, it is
country
A who placed first
also
it was distribution and retail that
cost
the consumer most in 2019.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however, while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapple, cost, country with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • world pineapple exports
  • top three producing countries
  • 2009
  • 2019
  • breakdown
  • cost to the consumer
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
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