The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The picture
illustrate
the number of global Change the verb form
illustrates
pineapple
exports from the top three pineapple
-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, along with
a detailed analysis of the consumer cost
per pineapple
in 2019.
Based on the data, it could be seen that compared to the other countries, country
B placed first as the country
who
exported the most Correct pronoun usage
that
pineapple
, with more than 4 millions
metric tonnes in 2009. Change to singular
million
In contrast
, country
C exported the least with only less than 2 millions
metric tonnes in the same year and Change to singular
million
country
A placed in second with number slightly higher than country
C. However
, in 2019, this
situation changed where
Correct word choice
when
country
A surpassed the other two countries by exporting almost 12 millions
metric tonnes of pineapples. Fix the agreement mistake
million
While
Correct word choice
Country
country
B placed in
second because they had a sharp Change preposition
apply
decreased
in their export and Replace the word
decrease
while
country
C had a slight increase, they still Capitalize word
Country
place
third.
Wrong verb form
placed
Also
, in 2019, distribution and retail had taken 35% of the consumer cost
per pineapple
. Taxes, profit, international transport and import licenses were
Change the verb form
were also almost taken
also
almost took much from the cost
. Only producer and export costs were ones
that Correct article usage
the ones
cost
a little with only 5% and 4% respectively.
In overview, in 2009 country
B placed first as pineapple
exporter. Correct article usage
a pineapple
However
, it is country
A who placed first also
it was distribution and retail that cost
the consumer most in 2019.Submitted by anandeaadhity on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however, while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapple, cost, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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