To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?
In recent days, many countries have started to use edible
insects
to support the increasing population. There are advantages and disadvantages to eating insects
. For instance
, the advantage of eating insects
is that the country can save crops
. Despite this
, some people
are scared to eat insects
.
To begin
with, there are some advantages to eating insects
except for crops
. First of all, insects
have a lot of nutrients as well as
meat such
as protein. Therefore
, eating insects
can make your body stronger just like eating meat. Moreover
, there are many varieties of insects
in the world so that people
do not get bored with the taste, also
eating insects
can make the environment better. Some edible insects
are eating crops
and they ruin them. Thus
, eating those insects
is helpful for crops
to grow well.
On the other hand
, there are disadvantages to eating insects
. Some people
are scared to eat insects
because they look worse and look so disgusting , especially for people
who are scared of insects
. Moreover
, there might be some bacteria and some diseases inside their body which make people
sick. Additionally
, some insects
also
have some parasites which are not good for people
at all and they sometimes make people
die.
To sum up
, there are some advantages and disadvantages of eating insects
. For example
, eating insects
is healthy for people
that contain a lot of protein. However
, some insects
have parasites that might make people
die. In conclusion, eating insects
is not good for people
for these reasons.Submitted by dokmally2 on
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