The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
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The bar graph illustrates the volume of
Japanese
citizens visiting abroad from 1885 to 1995. The line chart displays the share of these tourists
traveling
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to Australia during the same decade.
Overall
, tourism abroad saw a significant rise in popularity in Japan during the period. The percentage of
Japanese
visitors travelling to Australia
also
increased significantly over the decade. The number of
Japanese
residents
traveling
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out of the country grew steadily
year
on
year
, starting at around 5
million
in 1885 to nearly 11
million
in 1990, almost doubling. A slight decrease in the figures was observed in 1991 to just above 10
million
before continuing back to the upward trend in 1992 and peaking at approximately 15
million
by the end of the period. The proportion of these
Japanese
visitors welcomed by Australia increased dramatically from 2% in 1885 to more than double( nearly 5%) in 1988.
This
was followed by a slight drop to just over 4% in 1989 before plunging back and increasing
year
on
year
to just over 6% in 1994.
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