Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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agrees

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that

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should possess

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power to recall the user's mobile

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call records and messages for the purposes of safety.

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that

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should be prohibited as it would

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people

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's privacy. Both of these views will be

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discussed

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further

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on

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essay. The

benefit's

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side is that

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details on the

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calls and messages could help a criminal administration to track any

suspicous

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suspicious

activities done by the users. From

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, the investigators will have an ease to track down online hackers or criminals based on the activities issued from their

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phone

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phones

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. Without

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confidential information,

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governments will have a hard time

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the number of scammers, which their numbers now

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been increasing. One of the main

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the

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are prohibited from doing

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activity is it will

scares

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the

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mobile

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phone's

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phone

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users

to make

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from making

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any

phone

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calls or

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the

messager

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message

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.

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will worry the

people

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that any of their

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calls will lead to

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suspicious activity and eventually will make them

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one of the innocent suspects. In my opinion, the government should continue to have

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access

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to

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people

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's

phone

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calls and messages to ensure a better guarantee

on

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limiting any

phoen

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phone

call's

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call

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misusage by

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apply

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scammers and

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criminals. In conclusion, there are pros and cons to

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the power to access

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information.

Eventhough

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, it will be a big hand to help the

authorities

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to tackle

down

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any suspicious

acitivity

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activity

online,

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however

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other

people

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are more exposed to be one of the

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authorities's

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targets.