The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
The bar chart depicts the fluctuations of
prices
for average real estate in five cities in two
spans
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periods, between 1990 to 2002 and 1996-2002 in relation to
prices
in 1989. From an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that house costs significantly dropped in Tokyo, London and New York in
a
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period between 1990-1995,
whereas
for 1996-2002
prices
there were rising trend, especially in London. First and foremost the
prices
for London were lower than in 1989 more than 6%, in the period between 1990-1995,
while
they significantly surged and reached approximately 11% higher than in 1989.The other town where housing
prices
changed with the same scenario is New York.
Prices
in New York in the 1990-1995 periods dropped by 5% in comparison to 1989 years, though during the 1996-2002 there were changes to a positive position of 5%. Tokyo is the city with the least change to
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trend of house
prices
during the given span from approximately -7% to -5%.
In contrast
during the period 1990-1995, costs in Frankfurt increased by 3%,
nevertheless
,
afterwards
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there were falling down by 2% in 1996-2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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  • fluctuation
  • suburb
  • metropolitan
  • trend
  • appreciation
  • depreciation
  • residential market
  • housing bubble
  • real estate
  • economic factors
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure development
  • property value
  • inflation-adjusted
  • comparative analysis
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