The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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The

pictruse

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pictures

picture

show

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the number of temperatures and

daylight's

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daylight

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hours

in London and

Sydney

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the

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same weekend in

December

2018. Based on the data, it can be seen that from

December

28th and 29th, in the

, the minimum

temperature

was decreasing

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decreased

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by 1

degreen

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degree

degrees

celcius

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Celcius

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and the maximum

temperature

was increasing

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increased

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by 4

degree

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degrees

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celcius

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Celcius

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This

is because the sunrise and sunset

hours

had moved forward by 1 minute faster. In comparison, from

December

29th to

December

30th, the

minimum

temperature

was increasing

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increased

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from 3

degree

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degrees

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celcius

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celsius

to 5

degree

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degrees

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celcius

because the sunrise was rather constant at 08.06.

While

the maximum

temperature

was decreasing

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decreased

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quite faster from 13

degree

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degrees

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celcius

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celsius

to 10

degree

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degrees

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celcius

because the sunset was rather faster than the day before

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December

30th.

In contrast

, it can be seen that in

Sydney

, the

temperature

was rather hot compared to the one in the

. The minimum

temperature

Sydney

was constantly increasing by 1

degree

celcius

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celsius

from

December

28th to

December

30th.

Also

, the maximum

temperature

this

country was increasing rapidly

with

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degree

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degrees

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and 3

degree

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degrees

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celcius

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Celcius

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respectively.

This

phenomenon happened because the sunrise and sunset

hours

was

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were

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quiet

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quite

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constant in

this

country. In overview, the

temperature

was quite chilly because the

daylight's

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daylight

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hours

was

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were

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quite

fluctuative

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fluctuating

. In comparison,

Sydney

was much more hotter than the

because

hours

of daylight in

this

country

was

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were

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quite stagnant.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, sydney, december, uk, temperature, celcius, degree with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Word repetition
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30Grammar mistakes
 

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Topic Vocabulary:

The tables compare
temperatures
hours of daylight
ranged from
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slight increase
remained stable
significantly fewer
enjoyed
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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Some people think that the education system should focus on teaching students practical skills that are needed for employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the internet has brought people closer together by providing access to information and communication. Others argue that it has isolated people and decreased the quality of social interactions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, we can watch entertainment performance on the screen and no need to watch it live. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important what are the causes of this? Is this a positive or negative development?