Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say : 1. Congratulate your friend 2. Ask when would be possible for you to visit 3. Ask what present they would like.

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Hello, Dear Jenny

Firstly

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, I am so proud of you. The best part of your life is starting with your little princess.

Secondly

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, of course, congratulations! I am so happy on behalf of your family.

My and

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And

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friends can not wait to learn her name. I hope you and James found the best name for her.

Additionally

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, we want to see you and her, If it is possible.I know, you have just come home from the hospital. I do not want to disturb you.

However

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, please tell me your free time. I am very curious about her.

Finally

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, I am very sure that you have a lot of toys and baby things around your apartment.

Nevertheless

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, you would like to tell me what you need. I will feel honour

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If I make your life. Just tell me. I am so happy. P.S. I think the best name is Patik for your baby. Love and good wishes Kate

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coherence cohesion

Try to maintain a single idea in each paragraph to improve clarity.

task achievement

Ensure your request for a suitable present is direct to help the recipient easily respond.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are warm and appropriate for a friendly letter.

task achievement

You've effectively conveyed excitement and happiness throughout the letter, which is suitable for congratulating a friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

157 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

heartfelt congratulations
bundle of joy
adjustment period
suitable time
cherished gift
newfound responsibilities
practical assistance
joyous occasion
unwavering support
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