A lot of money is spent on repairing old buildings. Instead of repairing old buildings, that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new one. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people say that when trying to fix old

buildings

, replacing

it

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with new

buildings

will be a better way. In my opinion, I totally disagree with

this

point of view as the

cost

for destroy

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and

construct

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constructing

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the new

buildings

will be

cost

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apply

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more than

it

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that

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for

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repairing the old

buildings

. In

this

essay, I will discuss

about

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this

topic and extend more opinions. First of all, with

the

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large number of

buildings

, the payment for

kocking

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knocking

down will be expensive. Meanwhile, owners can

used

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efficiency

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the efficiency

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structure of the previous infrastructure to develop, so the

cost

for destroy

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of destroying

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and building the new

one

from the beginning can

be avoid

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.

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, if

owner

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the owner

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want

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to repair a high-rise building in the middle of the city, the process

to destroy

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of destroying

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all the

building

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buildings

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will

be complicate

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be complicated

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and it

takes

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will take

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a lot of

machine

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machines

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to complete,

while

change

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some details or

erect

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erecting

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more

buildings

based on the old structure will be faster and save more money.

Second,

the process of knocking down old

buildings

and building new

one

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ones

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wastes materials and resources. All the old materials can

be sell

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as

second hand

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product

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, it will be

waste

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wasted

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if the owner

want

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wants

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to destroy them.

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, when

owner

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an owner

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want

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wants

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to enhance the old

buildings

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building

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, the facility in the old building should

be sell

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be sold

be selling

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instead

of

destroy

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destroyed

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.

Besides

that, knocking down and

contructing

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constructing

the new building

require

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requires

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an enormous amount of labour.

For instance

, replacing a 50

levels

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apartment with a totally new

one

must have at least 100 to 200 workers for construction so the salary pay for the workers

cost

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costs

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a lot, and the money for hiring construction

machine

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machines

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also

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very high. In conclusion, knocking down the old

buildings

and constructing the new

one

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ones

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waste

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wastes

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money and

resouces

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resources

more than just repairing the old

buildings

.