The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and USA between 1920 and 2000.
The given chart provides information about the
birth
rates
of China
and the U.S.A. and their comparison from 1920 to 2000.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the birth
rates
of both
countries
fluctuated until 1950,
when the patterns in Remove the comma
apply
China
and the U.S.A. decreased drastically. Additionally
, both
countries
experienced slight upturns and downturns throughout the period.
Admittedly, in the U.S.A., more infants were born, in comparison with China
, about 13% and 10%, respectively. Both
countries
were growing steadily in the number of newborns until 1930,
when the number of newborns in Remove the comma
apply
China
surpassed that in the U.S.A. However
, ultimately, the birth
rates
in China
and in the U.S.A. diminished significantly, from 15% and about 13% to almost 5%.
From 1950, there was a dramatic increase in birth
rates
in both
countries
. China
led, growing up to 20%, while
the U.S.A. was 5% lower; meanwhile, in the following period, the birth
rates
of both
countries
plummeted substantially. The U.S.A., with a slight advantage over China
, led in the following period.Submitted by dnm.best on
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