the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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Caribbean

island

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visitors

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who stayed on cruise ships or

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island

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from 2010 to 2017. The chart

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the total

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of tourists. At first glance, it is evident that the total

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of

visitors

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had a significant increase over the seven years. Looking at the details, 1

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people visited the

island

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in 2010. The

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of

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rose gradually from 2010 to 2014, reaching 2.5

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in 2014. After 2014, it experienced another slight rise and

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, levelled off from 2015 to 2016.

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, it hit

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peak of 3.5

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, having a noticeable increase. In terms of the

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of people who stayed on cruise ships, it increased from less than half of a

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in 2010 to 0.5

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in 2011.

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it had a

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in 2012, it experienced a

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rise over the 5 years, reaching 2

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in 2017. Looking at the line for the

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of

visitors

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who stayed on the

island

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,

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remained under 1

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for a year and

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, it rose to 1

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and

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from 2011 to 2013. After staying steady during a

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period, it had a fall in 2016.

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, it increased from 2016 to 2017, coming back to 1.5

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