The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart compares the world
population
and
wealth
separation by percentage
according to
the regions.
Overall
, North
America
is the most economically developed among the other countries
whereas
, India and Africa
is
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the poorest regions.
Furthermore
, China has
growth
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population
regardless of its
wealth
degree and Rich Asia-Pacefic has
less
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fewer
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citizens,
although
it is economically advanced. On the one hand, North
America
has nearly 35 per
cent
rich people but it has over 5 per
cent
population
.
Then
, Europe follows North
America
according to
the global
wealth
distribution with 30 per
cent
and 15 per
cent
of the world
population
love in there.
Moreover
, Rich Asia-Pacefic is the third richest country among all countries which is the house of
the
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5 per
cent
of people.
On the other hand
, India and Africa are the least powerful nations with about 2 per
cent
and their people amount are over 15 and 10 per
cent
respectively. Other Asia Pacefic countries have nearly 3 per
cent
wealth
degree and over 15 per
cent
citizens.
Besides
that, Latin
America
and Caribean have 4 per
cent
income and approximately 7 per
cent
population
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, wealth, america, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • global population
  • distribution of wealth
  • percentages
  • region
  • Asia
  • Africa
  • Europe
  • North America
  • South America
  • Oceania
  • disparity
  • account for
  • follow
  • despite
  • vary
  • demonstrate
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