The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart compares the world
population
and wealth
separation by percentage according to
the regions.
Overall
, North America
is the most economically developed among the other countries whereas
, India and Africa is
the poorest regions. Change the verb form
are
Furthermore
, China has growth
Replace the word
a growing
population
regardless of its wealth
degree and Rich Asia-Pacefic has less
citizens, Change the quantifier
fewer
although
it is economically advanced.
On the one hand, North America
has nearly 35 per cent
rich people but it has over 5 per cent
population
. Then
, Europe follows North America
according to
the global wealth
distribution with 30 per cent
and 15 per cent
of the world population
love in there. Moreover
, Rich Asia-Pacefic is the third richest country among all countries which is the house of the
5 per Correct article usage
apply
cent
of people.
On the other hand
, India and Africa are the least powerful nations with about 2 per cent
and their people amount are over 15 and 10 per cent
respectively. Other Asia Pacefic countries have nearly 3 per cent
wealth
degree and over 15 per cent
citizens. Besides
that, Latin America
and Caribean have 4 per cent
income and approximately 7 per cent
population
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