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Test 1: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Test 1: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given maps compare the floor arrangement of a public
library
 20 years ago and today.
Overall
, there are significant changes
of
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in
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 the rooms in the corners, and there are some additional services provided by the
library
. 4 rooms in the corners are changed in terms of function. 2 decades ago,
room
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the room
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 in the right bottom corner was for
enquirements
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requirements
, now it
turns
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to
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into
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 a cafe.
Children's
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The children's
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 book section was on the upper right, it
moves
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moved
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 to the
room
 to its left with the addition of sofas and storytelling events.
Lecture
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The lecture
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room
 occupies the former
room
 used for
children
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book
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books
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.
Lastly
,
reading
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a reading
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room
 which was on the bottom left
are
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now transformed into
computer
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the computer
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room
. Adult fiction and non-fiction books were located in the hallway of the
library
 20 years ago.
Adult
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The adult
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 fiction book section which was
in
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on
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 the left side moves across to the opposite hallway, the same place as
information
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the information
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 desk and
self service
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self-service
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 machines. The left side is now occupied for the reference books only. The recent
library
 no longer provides tables and chairs which were originally placed in the center of the
library
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • significantly
  • expanded
  • restructured
  • sections
  • facilities
  • incorporated
  • digital catalogs
  • self-service kiosks
  • advanced computer facilities
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • transformative changes
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