The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The chart shows the
percentage
of owned and rented
households
Fix the agreement mistake
household
show examples
accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011 year.
Overall
, before 1971, the
perccentage
Correct your spelling
percentage
of
households
in tented accommodation
more
Add a missing verb
was more
show examples
than
households
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
owned
that
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
in England and Wales, and the tend perversion after 1971. In
the
Change the article
apply
show examples
1971, the
percentage
of
househlds
Correct your spelling
households
owned equality that of rented
households
. Before 1971, the
percentage
of
households
in tented
were decrease
Change the verb form
were decreased
were decreasing
show examples
from
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
less than 80% in
1918
Change the article
the 1918
show examples
year to below 60% in
1961
Change the article
the 1961
show examples
year.
Compare with
Verb problem
With
show examples
the
percentage
of
households
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
owned
were increase
Wrong verb form
increasing
show examples
from 1918 to 1961. It was reducing the gap between the
percentage
of
households
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
owned and that in tented. The largest gap between the
percentage
of
households
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
owned and tented in 1918. It was
appromately
Correct your spelling
approximately
60%. The
percentage
of
households
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
rented
were
Change the verb form
was
show examples
near
Rephrase
nearly
show examples
80%,
while
that of owned
households
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
show examples
over 20%. After 1971, the
percentage
of owned
households
increased slightly until 2011 when it saw a small decrease again. The
percentage
for rented
households
never exceeded 40% after 1971, whilst that for owned
households
never exceeded 70%.
Submitted by fiasngs on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 9 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!