You are taking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven't finished it. Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter introduce yourself -mehak 2nd year pursuing explain why you haven't handed in the project yet- health concer, i was allergic reaction due to my d=ffod coming in contact w mushrooms in the kitchen request more time to do it.- doc advised me to rest couple days and nor to put strain on eyes, next week will submi
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a
second year
student pursuing Business Administration, and I am taking Add a hyphen
second-year
BUS103
course with you Correct article usage
the BUS103
this
semester. Today, I am writing to you to explain why I wasn't able to submit the final project last
week. This
project was really important to me and it weighted
40% of the total grade.
Correct your spelling
weighed
However
, due to
an urgent health concern, I wasn't able to submit it on time. I have been allergic to mushrooms since childhood and I always make sure my food is prepared under special conditions in the college mess. Last
Monday, I had an allergic reaction and had to rush to the hospital in an ambulance considering the severe symptoms I experienced. My eyes and throat were swollen and I had rashes all over my body; thus
, I was kept under observation for a couple
days and doctors advised me to rest for a week Add the preposition
couple of
thereupon
.
Therefore
, I was unable to work on the final part of my assignment until today. I will
be really grateful to you if you could extend the deadline to next week. I am working on Wrong verb form
would
this
project in shifts and resting simultaneously.
Looking forward to your decision.
Yours sincerely,
Mehakjot Kaur BidingSubmitted by bidingmehakjot on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a single clear main idea. While the letter is cohesive, there could be a more distinct separation between the introduction, explanation, and request sections.
task achievement
Although the letter addresses all parts of the task, it could benefit from a more detailed explanation or supporting evidence for the health issue, such as a doctor's note or estimated recovery time.
task achievement
The writing tone is appropriate and respectful, fitting for a letter to a lecturer.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter is clear, and the sequence of information is easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite