the graph below shows the difference in wheat exports over three different areas.

the graph below shows the difference in wheat exports over three different areas.
The line graph provides the sales of
wheat
abroad from three different countries
such
as Australia,
Canada
and the European Community from 1985 to 1990. The
number
is measured in millions of
tonnes
. In 1985,
wheat
exports from
Canada
were 19
million
tonnes
before dropping slightly to 17
million
in the following year. For the next two years, the
number
escalated drastically and reached its peak in 1988 at 25
million
tonnes
.
Canada
saw a huge drop in exports by over 10
million
tonnes
in 1989.
At the end
of the
period
,
wheat
sales bounced back to the exact
number
it had at the beginning of the
period
. The European community sold approximately 17
million
tonnes
of
wheat
in 1985. The
number
dropped by 3
million
tonnes
the year after, after that
wheat
which was exported kept on rising until the end of the
period
at 21
million
and took over
Canada
as the top exporter of
wheat
. Australia was the lowest country that marketed
wheat
, with 15
million
of which were sent abroad. It experienced a slight increase in 1986, afterwards, the trend of
wheat
export was negative. In 1989, the
number
was at 11
million
and remained unchanged until 1990. In summary,
although
Canada
was the top exporter in 1985, the position was taken over by the European community
at the end
of the
period
.
However
, Australia stayed as the country with the lowest amount of
wheat
sent abroad.
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