the graph below shows the difference in wheat exports over three different areas.

the graph below shows the difference in wheat exports over three different areas.
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The line graph provides the sales of
wheat
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abroad from three different countries
such
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as Australia,
Canada
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and the European Community from 1985 to 1990. The
number
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is measured in millions of
tonnes
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. In 1985,
wheat
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exports from
Canada
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were 19
million
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tonnes
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before dropping slightly to 17
million
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in the following year. For the next two years, the
number
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escalated drastically and reached its peak in 1988 at 25
million
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tonnes
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.
Canada
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saw a huge drop in exports by over 10
million
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tonnes
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in 1989.
At the end
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of the
period
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,
wheat
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sales bounced back to the exact
number
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it had at the beginning of the
period
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. The European community sold approximately 17
million
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tonnes
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of
wheat
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in 1985. The
number
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dropped by 3
million
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tonnes
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the year after, after that
wheat
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which was exported kept on rising until the end of the
period
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at 21
million
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and took over
Canada
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as the top exporter of
wheat
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. Australia was the lowest country that marketed
wheat
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, with 15
million
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of which were sent abroad. It experienced a slight increase in 1986, afterwards, the trend of
wheat
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export was negative. In 1989, the
number
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was at 11
million
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and remained unchanged until 1990. In summary,
although
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Canada
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was the top exporter in 1985, the position was taken over by the European community
at the end
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of the
period
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.
However
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, Australia stayed as the country with the lowest amount of
wheat
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sent abroad.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, canada, number, tonnes, million, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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