You are getting married. Write a letter to an English speaking friend to invite him/her to the wedding.
Dear Shreena,
Hi! How are you? I hope we arranged engagement, haldi, and sangeet ceremonies. And on December 22nd mandap and main wedding ceremonies.
this
letter find
Change the verb form
finds
in
radiant health. I am writing Correct pronoun usage
you in
this
letter to invite you to the wedding functions. I getting married on December 22nd 2024. You always wanted to attend Indian
wedding and believe me you will enjoy all Correct article usage
an Indian
wedding
Correct article usage
the wedding
ceremony
.
I am married with Tejas Shingala. He is an engineer and now he is working as Fix the agreement mistake
ceremonies
radio
technician in Add an article
a radio
tridon
communication,Correct your spelling
triton
tri don
calgary
,Canada. We met Change the capitalization
Calgary
before
one year Change preposition
apply
at
my home. The meeting was arranged by my Rephrase
ago at
metarnal
aunt and it Correct your spelling
maternal
is arrange
Change the verb form
is arranged
Change preposition
for marrage
marrage
. But we have a great Correct your spelling
marriage
bonding
Replace the word
bond
as well as
understanding with each other.
On the wedding day, we organized five ceremonies as per our Indian
traditions. On the
December 21stCorrect article usage
apply
Add a comma
,
Furthermore
, we organize different types of Indian
cusines
so that, you will enjoy Correct your spelling
cuisine
cuisines
to try
our traditional food. Change the verb form
trying
Moreover
, you will enjoy to see
traditional Hindu Change the verb form
seeing
wedding
and Hindu rituals on the day of Fix the agreement mistake
weddings
wedding
.
You are my best friend and you must come in advance on the ground that you will help me Add an article
the wedding
for
my wedding preparation. After the Change preposition
with
wedding
you stay with my parents and you will visit Add a comma
wedding,
Indian
tourist places.
I hope to see you at the wedding.
Looking for positive
response.
Lots of love,
ShreenaCorrect article usage
a positive
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grammar
Ensure grammatical accuracy and correct spelling throughout the letter. For instance, 'find' should be 'finds', 'I getting married' should be 'I am getting married', 'India wedding' should be 'Indian wedding', 'marrid' should be 'married', 'metarnal' should be 'maternal', and 'arrange marrage' should be 'arranged marriage'.
structure
Use more varied sentence structures to enhance readability and demonstrate linguistic competence. For example, you can combine shorter sentences or use different types of sentences (simple, compound, complex).
task response
Consider adding more details about the specific ceremonies and what they entail to provide a richer cultural context for your English-speaking friend.
tone
The letter has a warm and inviting tone, which is appropriate for an invitation to a personal event like a wedding.
structure
Each paragraph generally sticks to a single idea, providing clarity and aiding in comprehension.
content
You have included essential details such as dates, your partner's background, and the types of ceremonies, which contribute to the completeness of the response.
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