You are getting married. Write a letter to an English speaking friend to invite him/her to the wedding.

Dear Shreena, Hi! How are you? I hope
this
letter
find
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in
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you in
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radiant health. I am writing
this
letter to invite you to the wedding functions. I getting married on December 22nd 2024. You always wanted to attend
Indian
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an Indian
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wedding and believe me you will enjoy all
wedding
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the wedding
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ceremony
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ceremonies
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. I am married with Tejas Shingala. He is an engineer and now he is working as
radio
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a radio
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technician in
tridon
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triton
tri don
communication,
calgary
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Calgary
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,Canada. We met
before
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one year
at
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my home. The meeting was arranged by my
metarnal
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maternal
aunt and it
is arrange
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is arranged
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for marrage
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marrage
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marriage
. But we have a great
bonding
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as well as
understanding with each other. On the wedding day, we organized five ceremonies as per our
Indian
traditions. On
the
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December 21st
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,
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we arranged engagement, haldi, and sangeet ceremonies. And on December 22nd mandap and main wedding ceremonies.
Furthermore
, we organize different types of
Indian
cusines
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cuisine
cuisines
so that, you will enjoy
to try
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our traditional food.
Moreover
, you will enjoy
to see
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seeing
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traditional Hindu
wedding
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weddings
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and Hindu rituals on the day of
wedding
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the wedding
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. You are my best friend and you must come in advance on the ground that you will help me
for
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with
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my wedding preparation. After the
wedding
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wedding,
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you stay with my parents and you will visit
Indian
tourist places. I hope to see you at the wedding. Looking for
positive
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a positive
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response. Lots of love, Shreena
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grammar
Ensure grammatical accuracy and correct spelling throughout the letter. For instance, 'find' should be 'finds', 'I getting married' should be 'I am getting married', 'India wedding' should be 'Indian wedding', 'marrid' should be 'married', 'metarnal' should be 'maternal', and 'arrange marrage' should be 'arranged marriage'.
structure
Use more varied sentence structures to enhance readability and demonstrate linguistic competence. For example, you can combine shorter sentences or use different types of sentences (simple, compound, complex).
task response
Consider adding more details about the specific ceremonies and what they entail to provide a richer cultural context for your English-speaking friend.
tone
The letter has a warm and inviting tone, which is appropriate for an invitation to a personal event like a wedding.
structure
Each paragraph generally sticks to a single idea, providing clarity and aiding in comprehension.
content
You have included essential details such as dates, your partner's background, and the types of ceremonies, which contribute to the completeness of the response.
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