The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
The two supplied maps
illustrates
the structure of the Change the verb form
illustrate
village
of Bunborough nowadays and developments for the village
in upcoming
Add an article
the upcoming
year
. However
, the construction
of new road
and railway Fix the agreement mistake
roads
line
can be clearly seen in the map.
Fix the agreement mistake
lines
Overall
, the
Bunborough Correct article usage
apply
village
will Capitalize word
Village
going to
become a developed area in the span Verb problem
apply
2024
, because a significant Change preposition
of 2024
expand
in Replace the word
expansion
construction
can be predicted for the coming year
.
Generally speaking, construction
of Correct article usage
the construction
railway
track will be the major development in the Correct article usage
a railway
village
. On the contrary
, there is increase
in the amount of houses near the railway line can be seen, Add an article
an increase
the increase
while
, the houses on the left side of road
will Add an article
the road
going to
removed. Verb problem
be
Furthermore
, construction
of two new hotels can be seen Correct article usage
the construction
in
next Change preposition
apply
year
. In contrast
, fishing
port will be converted into Add an article
the fishing
Promenade
, Correct article usage
a Promenade
while
the shops remains
the same. Clearly, a new Wrong verb form
will remain
road
can be seen in the upcoming year
which connects the road
to Lynwich.Submitted by kirivlogs0 on
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