You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter • offer to make a popular dish from your country • describe what this dish is • explain why it should be included in the event

Dear Mr Luis, I am Jacob, a member of the Richard Global Pupil Club, Brisbane with registration number 201536. I am writing to show my willingness to include my protein mango cake
dish
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the upcoming event based on popular foods of numerous nations. As you are the organiser of the event, I would like to participate in baking a protein-added mango cake. Primarily, it is one of the most popular dishes in my nation and particularly most of the bodybuilders and fitness trainers suggest it to their trainees. I can prepare
this
within 30 minutes for more than 20 people.
This
dish
contains ingredients like Alphonso mango, which is known as the king of fruits, Muscletech iso protein 3000 and some natural sweeteners.
Moreover
,
this
cake will surprise everyone as no other
dish
can beat it in its crunchy taste and the inner layers of dry fruits will leave a long-lasting impact on people. I think
this
dish
can be presented at
this
event as it is a cost-effective traditionally cooker-based Indian
dish
which anyone can prepare at home.
Additionally
, I am the only candidate to represent my country so it will be a great opportunity for me if you allow me to serve my
dish
. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Jacob Brown
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Contribution
  • Cuisine
  • Traditional
  • Ingredients
  • Preparation
  • Cultural significance
  • Celebrate
  • Diversity
  • Culinary traditions
  • National dish
  • Occasion
  • Unique attributes
  • Preparation method
  • Gourmet
  • Authentic
  • Flavorful
  • Recipe
  • Event arrangements
  • Showcase
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