The following diagram shows the paper manufacturing cycle

The following diagram shows the paper manufacturing cycle
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The following diagram shows the paper manufacturing cycle
This
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diagram indicates us
paper
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manufacturing process .
This
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diagram shows that we can get
paper
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by
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with
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two options. By recycled
paper
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and new
paper
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.
Firstly
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, I want to write about how to get
new
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a new
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paper
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.
First,
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people get materials from different types of forests ,
then
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it
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they
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transfers
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transfer
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to
wood-chip
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wood chips
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.
There
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Their
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woods that came from forests get smaller into
wood-chips
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wood chips
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.
Then
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it will
send
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be sent
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to
Pulp
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the Pulp
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and
paper
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factor . There in the industrial factory
wood-chips
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wood chips
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will pass all
processes
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the processes
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that lead to
appearing
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the appearance of
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new
paper
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. So , now I want to write about getting
paper
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by recycling it . After the all processes that
paper
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passed . Papers will
send
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be sent
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to customers
, after
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and, after
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the consuming
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consumption
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it
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apply
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become wasted
paper
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. All the consumed
paper
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will be collected and sent to
Pulp
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the Pulp
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and
paper
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factory. After all
processes
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processes,
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it will become
new
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a new
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one . By repeating
this
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cycle, we all have papers , that everyone can use for their own goals

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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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