The following diagram shows the paper manufacturing cycle
This
diagram indicates us paper
manufacturing process .
This
diagram shows that we can get paper
by
two options. By recycled Change preposition
with
paper
and new paper
. Firstly
, I want to write about how to get new
Correct article usage
a new
paper
. First,
people get materials from different types of forests , then
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
transfers
to Correct subject-verb agreement
transfer
wood-chip
. Correct your spelling
wood chips
There
woods that came from forests get smaller into Replace the word
Their
wood-chips
. Correct your spelling
wood chips
Then
it will send
to Wrong verb form
be sent
Pulp
and Correct article usage
the Pulp
paper
factor . There in the industrial factory wood-chips
will pass all Correct your spelling
wood chips
processes
that lead to Correct article usage
the processes
appearing
new Replace the word
the appearance of
paper
.
So , now I want to write about getting paper
by recycling it . After the all processes that paper
passed . Papers will send
to customers Wrong verb form
be sent
, after
Correct word choice
and, after
the consuming
Replace the word
consumption
it
become wasted Correct pronoun usage
apply
paper
. All the consumed paper
will be collected and sent to Pulp
and Correct article usage
the Pulp
paper
factory. After all processes
it will become Add a comma
processes,
new
one . By repeating Correct article usage
a new
this
cycle, we all have papers , that everyone can use for their own goalsSubmitted by bizhanalikhan6 on
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