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The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015.

The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015.
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The table shows statistics about employment and education in eight different European nations in 2015.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that Norway had the highest figures in all three aspects:
employement
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employment
unemployment
 rate, high academic level and average income,
whereas
 that of the rest represented varied
datas
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data
.
However
, it is interesting to note that Bulgarian's average income
gain
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 the fewest monthly sum even if their employed rate and
high
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 educated workers were in the mean.
To begin
 with, a closer look at the first column
show
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shows
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 that roughly about half and nearly
three
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 quarter of their
populations
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population
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 aged 16-64 years were employed. At 74.8%, Norway accounted for the highest rate among all other countries, followed by the United Kingdom at 72.7% and Austria at 71.1%.
While
 the remaining European nations: Latvia, Luxemburg, Portugal and Bulgaria, reached over 60%, Greece was the only
countries
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country
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 that just over 50%, at 50.8%. With regards to,
educations
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education
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, it is
also
 noticeable that Norwegians aged 25-64 years old with a university degree
was
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 the greatest percentages of all eight nations,
as well as
 gained the largest income at 41,483 euros.
While
Portugeses
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Portuguese
 with
university
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a university
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 education accounted for 22.9% which was the smallest
percentages
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percentage
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, they were paid more than
that
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of in
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Bulgaria at 8,435 euros and 3,332 euros, respectively.
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