The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015.

The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015.
The table shows statistics about employment and education in eight different European nations in 2015.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that Norway had the highest figures in all three aspects:
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employment
unemployment
rate, high academic level and average income,
whereas
that of the rest represented varied
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data
.
However
, it is interesting to note that Bulgarian's average income
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the fewest monthly sum even if their employed rate and
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educated workers were in the mean.
To begin
with, a closer look at the first column
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that roughly about half and nearly
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quarter of their
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aged 16-64 years were employed. At 74.8%, Norway accounted for the highest rate among all other countries, followed by the United Kingdom at 72.7% and Austria at 71.1%.
While
the remaining European nations: Latvia, Luxemburg, Portugal and Bulgaria, reached over 60%, Greece was the only
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that just over 50%, at 50.8%. With regards to,
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education
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, it is
also
noticeable that Norwegians aged 25-64 years old with a university degree
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the greatest percentages of all eight nations,
as well as
gained the largest income at 41,483 euros.
While
Portugeses
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Portuguese
with
university
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education accounted for 22.9% which was the smallest
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, they were paid more than
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Bulgaria at 8,435 euros and 3,332 euros, respectively.
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