The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives information about
people
's consuming habit
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habits
on
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of
coffee
and tea in five Australian cities
for
the Change preposition
over
last
4 weeks. Overall
, people
had similar drinking habits in all cities
with most people
went
to a cafe to buy Wrong verb form
going
coffee
or tea, except for Adelaide where there were slightly more people
who purchased instant
coffee
.
The number of individuals who visited a cafe for the
beverages in the Correct article usage
apply
last
four weeks was the highest in three cities
; Melbourne, Horbart
in Sydney, which accounted Correct word choice
and Horbart
more
than 60% of visitors. Change preposition
for more
Likewise
, most people
in Brisbane also
went to a cafe to buy coffee
or tea with just above 55%. The amount of people
who purchased instant
coffee
was the second highest in these for
areas, allocated to more than 45% Change preposition
apply
buyers
in four Change preposition
of buyers
cities
.
In contrast
, Adelaide's people
mostly consumed instant
coffee
in the last
four weeks, taking exactly half of the percentage. Instant
coffee
buyers was
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were
also
notably high, with just below 50%.
Similarities were seen in the number of people
who bought fresh coffee
where it was the lowest in all cities
. While
Sydney and Melbourne had more than 40% buyer
, the number in Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart stood below 40%.Fix the agreement mistake
buyers
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