The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons.

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The given maps illustrate alternatives that have been happening for the ground floor of the art

gallery

since 2005.

Overall

, it is important that the number of facilities that help people to have a good time in

this

place increase

while

some places were destroyed.

According to

the picture, today, the Entrance, Entrance hall and Presentation, in the centre of the building,

Exhibition

rooms 1 to 3, which are in the east of the

Gallery

, are in the same situation as in the prior time.

In contrast

, the sector of Stairs, next to the presentation, reduces and

this

area is divided into the Stairs and lift. The graphs demonstrate that they have found the ramp for the population who use wheelchairs next to the entrance.

In addition

, in the past

this

place had one

exhibition

whose

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

name

was

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

Exhibition

Room 4 in the west of the place in front of

Exhibition

Room 1;

however

this

room has been replaced by the district for the children;

additionally

, the office of the

gallery

is changed by the temporary

exhibition

Furthermore

, the cafe is altered to a vending machine and a

gallery

shop.

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