This process diagram shows how glass containers are made. The steps of the process are numbered 1 to 9.

This process diagram shows how glass containers are made. The steps of the process are numbered 1 to 9.
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The given diagram illustrates the process of making
glass
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containers
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.
Overall
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, there are nine steps, starting from heating
glass
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particles at high temperatures and ending with the production of
glass
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containers
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,
as well as
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sorting out defective products. In the first step,
glass
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particles are heated in a furnace at 1050°C until they melt and become malleable. The molten
glass
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is
then
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placed into the first mould, where it is pressed to form a basic shape.
After
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this
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, the
glass
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is transferred to a second mould to shape it into a container. In the next step, air is blown into the mould to ensure the container has the correct shape. Once the container is formed, it is heated again in a kiln at 482°C to strengthen the
glass
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.
After
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this
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heating process, the
containers
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are cooled for 60 minutes at 25°C to harden them. The finished
containers
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are
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inspected by workers. Any
containers
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that pass quality checks are packaged for distribution,
while
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those that do not meet standards are discarded as waste.
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