The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three

types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The three pie charts illustrate the average
amount
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of
sodium
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, saturated fat and added
sugar
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which is consumed by individuals in the USA in each meal.
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, it can be seen that the highest
amount
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of
sodium
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and saturated fat is consumed at dinner time,
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the snacks contain the most
amount
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of
sugar
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.
According to
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the charts we can observe that individuals consume 43% of
sodium
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and 37% of saturated fat at dinner which contains the great space of two first pie charts.
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, 42% of added
sugar
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is absorbed when people have snacks which is significantly higher in comparison with other meals. At breakfast, Americans consume almost the same
amount
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of fat,
sugar
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and
sodium
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which is shown by 16% for the first two nutrients and 14% for the
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one.
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, at lunch highest percentage of
sodium
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which is 26% is consumed and after that 26% of fat and
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19% of
sugar
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which has the
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rank.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, sodium, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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